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Script Editing &
Story Coaching

Caroline has worked as a story coach and script editor for writers from seven countries and across the U.S. for over 10 years. Having worked as a writer in film, TV, and theater in Los Angeles and New York, she has a vast knowledge of the industry. But it's her natural ability as a coach, her eye for bringing solutions to script problems, and her sincere desire to support other writers, that show through her unique, full-service approach.

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Read what Caroline's clients are saying about her.

1-on-1 Consultation

Story strategizing & coaching

Do you want to talk about a story idea you have, ask questions about your writing career, or get tips on writing a good screenplay? I help my clients formulate their ideas into a solid and compelling story, while providing ideas and inspiration. For writers who need a kick in the pants about their careers or with pursuing their creative aspirations, I offer tips and guidance on where and how to attack their goals head-on.

 

Our sessions may include my guidance on:​

  • An idea you're trying to develop

  • Your professional writing career

  • Submitting to production companies

  • Producing your own content

  • Entering competitions and festivals

  • Pursuing an agent or a manager​​

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Please note: if you'd like me to read anything beforehand, please book a script editing session instead.

script Editing

Script feedback, & editing

Whether you need a polishing of your finished draft, or a complete page-1 rewrite, I'll help you get your script to the level it needs to be. We'll meet for a 1-on-1 session to review my notes and discuss next steps. I won't  just let you know what needs fixing; I'll provide solutions to problems.

 

Depending on your needs, you can opt for:

  • My overall, general feedback on your plot, story structure, and character development.

  • Redlined, marked-up pages for dialogue, formatting, grammar, structure, character development, conflict, pacing, and more.

  • Your script revised with needed fixes, which could include Making dialogue more natural, punching up humor, cutting extraneous material, creating conflict in the story, improving story structure, and filling out characters​

Script Editing
Consultations
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