Script Notes & Story Develoment

For works in progress, or finished material, I offer overall script notes on structure, character development, and plot. I don't just let writers know what needs fixing- I provide solutions to their problems. Add Margin Notes to have your script annotated for formatting issues, dialogue, typos, grammar, and specific editing needs. Add a 60-minute 1-on-1session with Caroline to review her notes, get inspired, and find solutions.

For writers still trying to build their story, or who need help fixing something that feels broken, I help my clients formulate their ideas into a solid and compelling story. I'm skilled at seeing through the blocks they have and in providing creative ideas and inspiration. And for newer screenwriters, I also teach the technical skills they need to make them better writers. I don't just let them know their idea needs fixing- I provide solutions to their story's problems.

Sticky Notes

Story Development

Talk with Caroline 1-on-1 for inspiration and guidance in developing your story.

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Story Notes

Get Caroline's written notes on your material, including suggestions for problem areas.

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Creativity Coaching

We'll work together to build your story from the ground up, or I'll help you reconstruct what feels broken.