Do you have written material you want line notes and overall critique on? 

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For works in progress, or finished material, I offer overall story feedback as well as detailed notes in the margins on structure, character development, conflict, formatting, dialogue, and more. I don't just let you know what needs fixing; I provide solutions to problems.

 

What's included?

1. Redlined, marked-up pages for dialogue, formatting, grammar, structure, character development, conflict, pacing, and more.

2. 1-on-1 conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions.

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Book a single round of notes or book a series to get feedback on multiple drafts.