Feedback & Editing
Do you have written material you want line notes and overall critique on?
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For works in progress, or finished material, I offer overall story feedback as well as detailed notes in the margins on structure, character development, conflict, formatting, dialogue, and more. I don't just let you know what needs fixing; I provide solutions to problems.
What kind of service do you need?
option #1
Overall Critique
+ Editing
What's included?​
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Written feedback on your overall story, including structure, character development, and conflict.
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One-on-one conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions.
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Redlined, marked-up pages for dialogue, formatting, grammar, continuity, character development, conflict, pacing, and more.
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Script under 30 pages
$487 (with a 60-min 1-on-1) book it
$337 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1
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Script under 60 pages
$750 (with a 90-min 1-on-1) book it
$525 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1
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Script under 130 pages
$982 (with a 2-hour 1-on-1) book it
$682 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1
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Outline under 5 pages
$262 (with a 60-min 1-on-1) book it
$150 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1
Note: Page count is based on the industry standard screenplay format, as seen in screenwriting software, such as Final Draft.
option #2
Overall Critique
What's included?
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-
Written feedback on your overall story, including structure, character development, and conflict.
-
One-on-one conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions.
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Script under 30 pages
$375 (includes a 60-min 1-on-1) book it
$225 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1
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Script under 60 pages
$450 (includes a 60-min 1-on-1) book it
$300 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1
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Script under 130 pages
$540 (includes a 60-min 1-on-1) book it
$390 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1
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Outline under 5 pages
$262 (includes a 60-min 1-on-1) book it
$150 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1
Note: Page count is based on the industry standard screenplay format, as seen in screenwriting software, such as Final Draft.