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Notes & Feedback
Do you have written material you want critique on?
For works in progress, or finished material, I offer overall story feedback as well as detailed notes in the margins on structure, character development, conflict, formatting, dialogue, and more. I don't just let you know what needs fixing; I provide solutions to problems.
What's included?
(1) Redlined, marked-up script
(2) Separate document with more general feedback
(3) 1-on-1 conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions.
My feedback may include notes on:
- structure
- character development
- conflict
- pacing
- dialogue
- formatting issues
- marketability
Book a single round of notes or book a series to get feedback on multiple drafts.
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