Feedback & Editing

Do you have written material you want line notes and overall critique on?

For works in progress, or finished material, I offer overall story feedback as well as detailed notes in the margins on structure, character development, conflict, formatting, dialogue, and more. I don't just let you know what needs fixing; I provide solutions to problems.

What kind of service do you need?

option #1

Overall Critique
+ Editing

What's included?

Written feedback on your overall story, including structure, character development, and conflict.
One-on-one conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions.
Redlined, marked-up pages for dialogue, formatting, grammar, continuity, character development, conflict, pacing, and more.

Script under 30 pages

$487 (with a 60-min 1-on-1) book it

$337 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1

Script under 60 pages

$750 (with a 90-min 1-on-1) book it

$525 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1

Script under 130 pages

$982 (with a 2-hour 1-on-1) book it

$682 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1

Outline under 5 pages

$262 (with a 60-min 1-on-1) book it

$150 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1

Note: Page count is based on the industry standard screenplay format, as seen in screenwriting software, such as Final Draft.

option #2

Overall Critique

What's included?

Written feedback on your overall story, including structure, character development, and conflict.
One-on-one conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions.

Script under 30 pages

$375 (includes a 60-min 1-on-1) book it

$225 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1

Script under 60 pages

$450 (includes a 60-min 1-on-1) book it

$300 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1

Script under 130 pages

$540 (includes a 60-min 1-on-1) book it

$390 (no 1-on-1 session) book with no 1-on-1