Do you have written material you want critique on? 

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For works in progress, or finished material, I offer overall story feedback as well as detailed notes in the margins on structure, character development, conflict, formatting, dialogue, and more. I don't just let you know what needs fixing; I provide solutions to problems.

 

What's included?

(1) Redlined, marked-up script

(2) Separate document with more general feedback

(3) 1-on-1 conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions.

 

My feedback may include notes on:

- structure

- character development

- conflict

- pacing

- dialogue

- formatting issues

- marketability

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Book a single round of notes or book a series to get feedback on multiple drafts.