Detailed line notes, general story feedback, and a 1-on-1 session.
- 1 hr 30 min1 hour 30 minutes
- 750 US dollars$750
- On Zoom
For works in progress, or a finished draft, I offer overall story feedback as well as detailed notes in the margins on structure, character development, conflict, formatting, dialogue, and more. I don't just let you know what needs fixing; I provide solutions to problems. What's included? - Redlined, marked-up pages for dialogue, formatting, grammar, structure, character development, conflict, pacing, and more. - 90-minute one-on-one conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions. For standard-format scripts under 60 pages.