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Overall Critique + Editing (<60 pages)

Detailed line notes, general story feedback, and a 1-on-1 session.

  • 1 h 30 min
  • 750 US dollars
  • On Zoom


For works in progress, or a finished draft, I offer overall story feedback as well as detailed notes in the margins on structure, character development, conflict, formatting, dialogue, and more. I don't just let you know what needs fixing; I provide solutions to problems. What's included? - Redlined, marked-up pages for dialogue, formatting, grammar, structure, character development, conflict, pacing, and more. - 90-minute one-on-one conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions. For standard-format scripts under 60 pages.

Cancellation Policy

You may cancel your booking for a full refund up to 48 hours in advance of the start of the booked session(s). You may reschedule up to 24 hours in advance.

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