1-on-1 Coaching
& Script Services
Caroline has coached writers from seven countries and across the U.S. for 10 years. Having worked as a writer in film, TV, and theater in Los Angeles and New York, she has a vast knowledge of the industry. But it's her natural ability as a coach, and her sincere desire to support other writers, that show through her unique, full-service approach.
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What kind of service do you need?
talk about your idea
Do you want to talk about a story idea you have, ask questions, or get advice?
For writers still trying to build their story, or who need help fixing something that feels broken, I help my clients formulate their ideas into a solid and compelling story, while providing ideas and inspiration. For writers who need a kick in the pants about their careers or with pursuing their creative aspirations, I offer tips and guidance on where and how to attack their goals head-on.
Our sessions may include my guidance on:​
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an idea you're trying to develop
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your professional writing career
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submitting to production companies
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producing your own content
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entering competitions and festivals
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pursuing an agent or a manager
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Note: This type of booking gets you a 1-on-1 with Caroline to get help developing your story idea or talk about your writing goals. It does not include Caroline actually reading your material.
Get Script feedback
Do you have a script you want detailed notes and overall critique on?
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For works in progress, or a finished draft, I offer overall story feedback as well as detailed notes in the margins on structure, character development, conflict, formatting, dialogue, and more. I don't just let you know what needs fixing; I provide solutions to problems.
Depending on your needs, you can opt for:
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Simply general feedback on your overall story.
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Redlined, marked-up pages for dialogue, formatting, grammar, structure, character development, conflict, pacing, and more.
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A one-on-one conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions. 2-hour session for features; 1-hour for shorts and TV.
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Note: This type of booking gets you feedback on something you've already written, whether a completed script, or your outline.
get script fixing
Looking for someone to revise your screenplay?
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Whether you just need a polishing of your finished script, or a complete page-1 rewrite, I'll get your script to the level you need it to be.
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Revisions and rewrites may include:​
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Making dialogue more natural
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Punching up humor
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Cutting extraneous material
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Creating conflict in the story
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Improving story structure
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Filling out characters
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Note: This type of booking gets you a revised script or outline. Caroline doesn't just let you know what needs fixing, she actually fixes it for you.
Pick up the phone and call me, open the computer and email me, or fill out my online form, and let's see how I can help you become the writer you know you can be.
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(323) 333-3453