Overall Critique + Editing
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General written feedback on your structure, conflict, dialogue, character development, and plot.
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Redlined, marked-up pages for dialogue, formatting, grammar, structure, character development, conflict, pacing, and more.
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One-on-one conference with Caroline to review her notes, get suggestions, and ask questions.
Under 130 pages: $982
without a 1-on-1 session: $682
just overall feedback (no editing): $540
no editing and no 1-on-1 session: $390
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Under 60 pages: $750
without a 1-on-1 session: $525
just overall feedback (no editing): $450
no editing and no 1-on-1 session: $300
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Under 30 pages: $487
without a 1-on-1 session: $337
just overall feedback (no editing): $375
no editing and no 1-on-1 session: $225
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General, overall story feedback (notes on story, characters, conflict, etc.) = $390.00 USD
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Add editing, which includes redlined, marked-up pages for dialogue, formatting, grammar, structure, character development, conflict, pacing, and more = additional $290.00 USD
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Add a 2-hour one-on-one Zoom conference with me to review my notes, get suggestions, and ask questions = additional $300.00 USD
Script Length | General feedback | Margin notes | 1-on-1 session |
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3 | Kale | 4:30pm | |
2 | - | 4:00pm | |
2 | Eggs & Gluten | 3:30pm | |
3 | - | 4:30pm |
2016 Tour Dates | Location | Tickets |
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Fri., June 20 | The Academy, L.A | Book It |
Thu., June 19 | Bamboo, Santa Barbara | Book It |
Sat., June 28 | Cheers, Santa Cruz | Book It |
Wed., July 6 | The Roxy, San Francisco | Book It |